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我试着从Duff的英文版转译过来开头几段。这个本子比Rowe和Ridley的都要新,读起来稍微顺一点。翻译的时候尽量带上韵脚,其实史诗本来就气势磅礴,浑然天成,韵脚反而有胖脚之嫌。这里只是游戏之作,为你捧捧场。, K1 ]8 y3 E( Z$ N4 `% j0 W
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我所吟唱的战争,
9 H) {3 y/ Q2 T6 Z, E& \* V在埃马提亚原野;
% M5 }5 b# _& j L) g8 U0 M3 ]何止是兄弟相残,9 x; S2 X; ~( Q2 @% j$ P4 G
正道屈从于罪孽。 O! |+ p4 z6 s5 \. }# M
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听我为你们叙述,1 b0 [7 Q: d y0 V, |
一个伟大的民族,7 Z- v9 G' S# U3 [- F( h# ]7 x
竟把胜利的右手,
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巨头协议已撕裂,
% `6 f1 n9 X- E: ]世界在震荡瓦解;
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沦落到罪人之列。
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" p4 _) {7 D- A# r1 t同样的军旗,
3 s6 w; d+ E) E6 @& E l同样的鹰徽,
6 g8 H) g. E/ J1 n% b* h6 ^# f还有同样的投枪,: E$ I: \' v/ B \% A6 q$ V9 l
却是交战的双方。. V8 [: B* k6 ~' x; C0 N4 O
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我的国人们啊,
: Z; q8 Y, x3 F* e你们的淫祀如此放浪3 v2 k( ]9 V! O9 k8 Y* }
以屠杀作为献祭
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为他复仇者何人? K" S1 ~% n% Q& c6 d# h! K4 m
你们本该扫荡巴比伦,
( _/ w/ o/ _# d7 A* I夺回来自意大利的战利品!* |( B% N3 |' \- X" Y
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你们却向敌国展现,
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纵然赢得了战争,0 N1 }2 T: @+ X% ~0 K
也绝不会有凯旋。
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罗马人手中的鲜血,& r& t7 f: k, X& r5 z
本应换得多少土地和海洋:
. l6 w6 x7 ~% d( P' r w3 A从太阳升起之处,
8 k2 t8 S6 z: U( c9 _# q1 T到星辰隐入夜幕的地方;: F7 C3 D1 U, u/ q% ~1 c& p
从暑气灼烧的南国,
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严冬之乡。
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' T1 R1 @ e" X' i9 _Of war I sing, war worse than civil,9 a; n+ N% e/ t) X& a+ y: q
waged over the plains of Emathia,
% O C v: }2 f2 O% {5 M1 Vand of legality conferred on crime ;
1 d6 j0 g2 c' } I tell how an imperial people
! R* s5 m$ X3 T" v% h2 iturned their victorious right hands against their own vitals ;
6 c. m; s5 F" H' H8 y8 a3 ~3 B. I9 D# Jhow kindred fought against kindred ; ' a7 l9 z' z% U. B! i; K
how, when the compact of tyranny was shattered, 2 r/ R' C' ~. {6 R$ P, ~( ?9 L
all the forces of the shaken world contended. u/ o9 @2 f% B- a& n
to make mankind guilty; : z' }" @9 h( o _& `
how standards confronted hostile standards, , g3 N* Q, z( C" C1 D& P5 A
eagles were matched against each other, % u6 k& A% C# V3 E
and pilum threatened pilum.
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5 b6 b# }5 ~- I3 Y6 bWhat madness was this, my countrymen,
/ k3 s; k6 n3 R' Y: c- |5 @what fierce orgy of slaughter ? 3 u: q$ T# Q% u( N/ `
While the ghost of Crassus
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rob proud Babylon of her trophies over Italy,
]$ a' o* d8 Z" Zdid you choose to give to hated nations the spectacle of * }* Y9 ?" |* l2 h
Roman bloodshed, and to wage wars that could win
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