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我试着从Duff的英文版转译过来开头几段。这个本子比Rowe和Ridley的都要新,读起来稍微顺一点。翻译的时候尽量带上韵脚,其实史诗本来就气势磅礴,浑然天成,韵脚反而有胖脚之嫌。这里只是游戏之作,为你捧捧场。
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伐刹利阿
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5 W9 o- ]! ~2 D- V我所吟唱的战争, w4 C' W5 A. s; ?0 P8 R
在埃马提亚原野;( |, K& {" H9 Y$ [; r k! x' D
何止是兄弟相残,
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听我为你们叙述,
]0 ?5 A7 n' @. K一个伟大的民族,, t! M: b5 R* n4 N2 s% B
竟把胜利的右手,' u, _8 F; K( F
扼向自己的肺腑;
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巨头协议已撕裂,& G) k% u1 `" r
世界在震荡瓦解;, R, a4 @- ?" b9 J( K( i
骨肉间拼力厮杀
/ c3 ~7 z2 j/ ]沦落到罪人之列。
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3 |& a6 k& u$ c) s同样的军旗,( @) F# X$ C) a- h( i) N
同样的鹰徽,# v2 {% M K7 `& [1 O
还有同样的投枪,0 ~% k6 ~& J) q1 a4 n1 n
却是交战的双方。
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我的国人们啊,7 F e3 O: W4 T8 h
你们的淫祀如此放浪
9 h/ S; n" D1 u8 `; h8 M以屠杀作为献祭
- R5 q* e. ]- @& O这是怎样的疯狂?* ]4 p4 s0 k; b$ o3 g1 P. f
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克拉苏游荡的冤魂,
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k. \( K$ K6 [/ A你们本该扫荡巴比伦,* a# P/ r- Y5 x9 J8 {
夺回来自意大利的战利品!# m; x# D& i; @" I% E0 w
+ y R' r( U( K1 F$ D- j你们却向敌国展现,
$ h- e. E9 y+ W/ z罗马人血泊的奇观;7 o- A2 c1 T, j
纵然赢得了战争,( Z+ x; u# X" S# S: N1 I2 n
也绝不会有凯旋。
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# T6 Y) ? i6 `% }$ E' i罗马人手中的鲜血,1 `& w# r. Q/ L; J8 G
本应换得多少土地和海洋:' z0 c! `- M' r0 e9 J
从太阳升起之处,4 N' r6 s7 D. x8 p
到星辰隐入夜幕的地方;: D* R* y- Z9 z( q- ?
从暑气灼烧的南国,
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6 }! R. t. U4 T& D冰封西徐亚海的+ b! C6 |$ Z9 X$ r K
严冬之乡。! y1 L( X h2 b+ N0 z/ V9 N
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部分原文4 c5 u m: G) {. Z' g' O7 @
4 U5 Z& X! d' x6 Q& b' F; ~Of war I sing, war worse than civil,3 P2 K0 e' i# q
waged over the plains of Emathia,9 o, F7 a0 Q* ]9 l1 F: _$ W. j, p/ @
and of legality conferred on crime ;
3 W( i* a1 j' S+ I8 { I tell how an imperial people
' {6 s9 x1 K" e4 U4 Q% d9 Kturned their victorious right hands against their own vitals ;
3 g; y0 b4 y! n' Q% C7 c6 z6 D* Hhow kindred fought against kindred ;
/ L% |( c5 l! M9 }* S" C& ahow, when the compact of tyranny was shattered, / b/ n& b4 O: T E0 n* @5 Z4 t1 ^. f
all the forces of the shaken world contended) O$ Z5 P, L* P
to make mankind guilty; " P, n: Z9 r: N3 Y0 S7 |
how standards confronted hostile standards,
9 [7 G! Y% v Z- a; ceagles were matched against each other, 8 \% C/ V6 ^4 D
and pilum threatened pilum. 3 d: d$ [+ {9 H* {! R m
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What madness was this, my countrymen, " }- G1 D' J+ D0 L* m# M
what fierce orgy of slaughter ?
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still wandered unavenged, and it was your duty to 9 w$ v" o3 A1 |. v. H' L
rob proud Babylon of her trophies over Italy,
V: `2 u) @% s3 vdid you choose to give to hated nations the spectacle of
/ a" `) R$ Z: {Roman bloodshed, and to wage wars that could win
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