秋之景

仁 · 发表于 2011-9-15 03:22:16

本帖最后由仁于 2014-4-8 23:39 编辑

风
吹得天也孤寂
缠绵的泪
似雾如雨
不谙秋寒的鸟
无奈地渴望巢穴
曾经的拥有
因为不再
而可怕

Autumn Scene

Blows the wind
In the lonely sky
I am as lonely with
tears filled eyes
It feels like fog
Also like rain
A bird, frightened by the weather
Is seeking a nest in vain
What he had before
Makes him feel so bad
Since he doesn't have it anymore

山菊 · 发表于 2011-9-15 04:39:01

下班之前，也试一下~~~晚上再来改：

秋风扫过
寂寞的天空
寂寞的我
泪滴似雨
泪眼朦胧
一只冻坏的鸟
徒劳地寻找归巢
曾经的拥有
因为不再拥有
令他十分悲伤

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